Very imaginative piece of work, I think you should have kept the colour of your model as it was, however it still looks quite fine and works well! Lovely and a very nice Level 1 entry
Perhaps having just a red glow around her face where she blew the butterflies? My opinions are personal and it may or may not help for future deviations. If I can assist you with anything do not hesitate to get in touch with myself or someone at the group